I'm Consumed
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Demo:
Liner Notes:
Songwriters writing about songwriting probably doesn't have much of an audience outside other songwriters but this is what came out. Hopefully it works in a larger context.
Roland R-05 handheld recorder
Yairi DY-46 acoustic guitar
TC's voice
Lyrics:
Staring at the blank page
Wondering what it could mean
Frozen with possibilities
The details remaining unseen
And I don't know why
My mind is confused
Feeling abused
And I, I don't know why
This feeling is back
I'm under attack
I'm consumed
Staring into the mirror
Afraid of what I will see
Accusations gazing back
Knowing that I am guilty
And I don't know why
My mind is confused
Feeling abused
And I, I don't know why
This feeling is back
I'm under attack
I'm consumed
I can't help but wonder
Why my muse has been gone for so long
Did she fall into slumber
Or did I do something so wrong?
And I don't know why
My mind is confused
Feeling abused
And I, I don't know why
This feeling is back
I'm under attack
I'm consumed
Do you feel it, too?
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.
Comments
Really like the guitar work at 1 minute mark and right at the end. Lyrics work.
This is very nice. Has a Neil Young feel to it but TC firmly stamped on it. Superb guitar and vocal performance.
Nice tune, really nice changes in the progression. Like it.
Love that chords at the end of the chorus, and the chord changes at the bridge. It feels really honest without being sappy.