Constellations
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Lyrics:
Evening comes and brings the frost
I stare at the stars as I feel lost
I wait for you not matter the cost to me
I swear you said this was the spot
Around the corner from the town square clock
This is where you said I ought to be
And the constellations spin around and they laugh at me
And I just wish they'd travel on and let me be
It's time to move on
Been waiting here all night long
Though I know that you have gone
(I'll) be waiting here until the dawn for you
I can't stand to leave this place
I stare at the stars and see your face
I'm waiting for you just in case you're true
And the constellations spin around and they laugh at me
And I just wish they'd travel on and let me be
It's time to move on
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Comments
i like the rhymes , even some inner rhymes in there as well! really good use of the stars to paint a life picture! nice one
This is amazing. It is so sad and emotional. The connection to the character is well done. Loved the music and vocal presentation. Wonderful skirmish!
Ahh! I love the focus on navigation you went with here! This is a cool song, feel like I'm gonna have to listen to it a few times.
Beautiful song with true emotion, sang and played amazingly, goes straight into my heart.
A winner! Great guitar and lyrics, and your performance is wonderful!
Yes! Love the chorus and your storyline. Very clear imagery of what the narrator is experiencing. Great energy and emotion.
I love this, haunting and beautiful.
A well done interstellar breakup song!
Lyrics are rock solid and the guitar is awesome. The recording quality on the guitar sounds great, interesting strumming pattern and some nice embellishments.
I really like this one. The rhymes are great, and used in a way I hadn't thought of before. Your playing is great too. I really like the concept that you pulled through this. Nice skirmish!