freezing summer

freezing summer

Adnama17's picture




freezing bite-size summer for later
petite peach snowballs

fuzzy snowflakes to tickle my chin
like Daddy's stubble

flushed yellow sun drops
to nurse my icicle flesh

ruby inner thigh frost
pricking my grey skin awake

stave the glacier
compacting in my lungs

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headfirstonly's picture

Those look scrummy. We're into the season of mists, and that's mellow fruitfulness, right there. Love the little sense-pictures in the verses.

mike skliar's picture

what great turns of phrase there! and now i want some peach pie Smile