A Good Sunset

A Good Sunset

Sunfire's picture


Liner Notes: 

Had it in mind to write 'Sunset" as my final lyric posting for this year's 50/90, but this slight alteration in the title hook came to me today and decided to post it.

I'm sure i will post more. Heehee : - )

Had it in mind originally as something with a fast dance beat, maybe electronica but then thought some of the vocab didn't vibe with something rhythmic but who knows.
Could also picture this as a ballad with soft sounding music and or a guitar solo and ocean tide sounds with a few sea gulls.

Open to collaboration


A Good Sunset

A good sunset
Will relax the mind
That orangey glow
Helps me unwind
A good sunset
Melts into the night
Soothing look has power
Hypnotic sight

A good sunset
Calms the heart and soul
Magic in the sky
Makes me feel whole
A good sunset
Ushers in the dark
It's the days final stand
And one last spark

I make a wish when looking west
Never ever getting stressed
Knowing this feeling will return if I get
A really, really good sunset

A good sunset
From a sandy shore
With gulls flying high
And so much more
A good sunset
Whispers and a kiss
Can do lots for my health
Heavenly bliss

Sunfire © 2021

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kahlo's picture

Lovely vivid descriptions and beautiful sentiment. I truly hope that this is not your final 50/90 post!

billwhite51's picture

all true. makes me nostalfic for when lived on the western shore with the sun setting on the sea's horizon. havent seen a sunset in many years now, so thank you for the lyric that brings them back into my vision.

Belladonna's picture

Lovely visions. Nice write. It feels appropriate to all of us slowing down here with 50/90.

headfirstonly's picture

Very true. Always nice to recognise a fellow aficionado of good sunsets (I've had some cracking ones here over the last few days). They really are magic in the sky.

richaaaay's picture

Ooooo....I like this. Any chance I can take a shot at putting some music to this?