My friend is in love with a shady guy who happens to be a famous actor (can't say who, I'm sworn to secrecy!)... He is prone to messing her about. I thought I'd write about it!
Open to feedback on anything... I took aaagges with the chorus lyrics on this one ... so ideally don't tell me to change that
Also is there anything I can add to this to make it a fuller sound.... any suggestions welcome!
What you doing chasing that actor again?
He ain't in touch with his feelings and he'll only let you down again
Don't you need someone real to love?
Not a phoney who makes his living being someone he's not
He’s got you caught up in his little web of lies
Smooth in his delivery of hollow lines
don't go falling in love
why you gotta fall in love with that actor
You’re holding on to the hope that maybe one day he will stay
But as soon as he’s had his fun he’ll jet back to L.A
Leave you wondering if he ever really loved
Or was it all a dream you woke up too fast from?
He will break your heart, like he’s playing a part
don’t go falling in love, why you gotta get in love, with that actor
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