No more Tears

No more Tears

coolparadiso's picture
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Liner Notes: 

Just woke. A quick write to the prompt Tears, not in a position to do music.

Lyrics: 

Tears

V1 Enough’s enough
Nope no more
Ive paid the price
I know the score

V2 It is what it is
Yet the wounds were deep
My sanity teetered
I wanted to weep

Pc But i wouldnt relent
Fall to my fears
No more wasting time
On you, with tears

C No more sadness
No more pain
No more tears
Wouldn’t do it again

V3 Wasted my time
But I’ve learnt
With you i guess
Id always get burnt

V4 But i didn’t give in
I stayed alert
I didn’t allow myself
To Hurt

Pc i wouldn’t relent
Fall to my fears
No more wasting time
On you, with tears

C No more sadness
No more pain
No more tears
Wouldn’t do it again



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Comments

vivalarayna's picture

"No more wasting time/On you, with tears" - they truly are wasted on some people, aren't they? Very focused lyrics of setting clear boundaries with the other person and oneself. Nice job!

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful write. Looking forward to hearing your gorgeous singing and playing. I love the sentiment here.

kahlo's picture

Strong succinct lyrics that convey a very relatable sentiment. I like the strength in moving forward that is conveyed!

There's a strong choice in these lyrics in how to engage (or not engage). Done with tears. I like it.

AndreaB's picture

It's like an epiphany and a motivational speech to oneself. A realization of what's wrong and a plan to overcome. It's great!