Rise Like a Phoenix
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Liner Notes:
Super-skirmish A, prompt: Phoenix (could be the bird, the city, or however else you are inspired)
Lyrics:
V1:
This version of me
I don't really see
As the real deal
Behind a mask
Afraid to ask
Forgotten how to feel
PRE:
Need to allow this sun to set
There's no danger, there's no threat
The next adventure will be better yet
CH:
Gonna Rise Like a Phoenix
Turn those ashes into something
That makes a difference
At least to someone
Rise Like a Phoenix
Gonna keep my head held high
Fulfill my deliverance
'Till this next life's said and done
V2:
The part of me that resists
I need to dismiss
Just let it float away
'Cause there's still time
Though it might be a climb
But it's the only way
PRE:
Step onto the funeral pyrhh
Move the focus bright and clear
Take a breath and blow out all that fear
CH:
Gonna Rise Like a Phoenix
Turn those ashes into something
That makes a difference
At least to someone
Rise Like a Phoenix
Gonna keep my head held high
Fulfill my deliverance
'Till this next life's said and done
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Comments
Inspirational and uplifting! The verses are especially catchy, and like the jangly, folky guitar. Nice skirmish song!
Uplifting song! Nice vocal delivery and guitar playing. Always enjoy hearing your tunes.
This is really wonderful! I love the positive uplifting message. Great chorus! Wonderful uplifting vocals and drive of the guitar strum help build the optimism of the message.
Love the uplifting feeling in your song and the optimistic feel. Very inspiring work and cool take on a skirmish prompt.
I love the uplifting and hopeful message in this song. The lyrics have such positivity to them and your delivery adds a lot to that. It builds to an anthemic feel on the chorus, really nice work!