The Eye of Your Hurricane
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When: Wednesday Skirmish August 18th 2021 8pm BST, 3pm EDT, 2pm CT, 12noon PDT
Theme: Hurricane - be it Fred, Grace, or Henri, the tropics are brewing with action this time of year!
Tags: skirmish, songskirmish, s081821, feast, hurricane
What: We will have a one hour skirmish to write to a prompt.*
This was my prompt, so I have no one to blame but myself for this absolute Turdy McTurdblossom of a crappy romance novel lyrics. By V2 I just decided to go all in with the bad. I will neither confirm, nor deny, the existence of double entendres here! Some of you need Jesus. JUST! SAYING!
(HINT: It's okay to laugh. This was meant to be cheesy! Let's face it - most hurricanes think they're a Category 5 when in reality they're barely a Tropical Depression. 
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Lyrics:
VERSE 1
Mmmm, feel the warm breeze blow
Mmmm, barometer low
Waves are cresting as I sink into the sands
As I sink… into your hands
CHORUS
I'm caught up in the eye of your hurricane
In a wall of clouds and pouring rain
Like a storm surge rising I can't contain
How I feel in the eye
Of your hurricane
VERSE 2
The energy between us rapidly intensifies
Like the thunder in these stormy skies
The windows rattle when my name I hear you call
When your Category 5 makes landfall
(CHORUS)
BRIDGE
Meeting on the ocean
Tropical convergence
Caught in circular motion
Passionate resurgence
Building, churning
There's no dissipation tonight
© R. C. Richardson
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Comments
Fanastic! I love the vocabulary usage and rhymes. Let's all head for this storm, lol
Happy days. Handled well.
Very well done!! That's one tempting storm. Love the "windows rattling" and "when your Category 5 makes landfall"! Excellent lyric.
Wonderfully vivid, passionate, and sensual! I missed this skirmish! Love it! I will have to try this prompt before I see more songs for it.
Yes it has a really interesting flow! Its a really good lyric i really like how the third line rolls into the 4th.
You tapped straight into the weathervane with this lyric! Great write...