Dance with you

Dance with you

Anaezia's picture

Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

So I tried making a dance song and I don't know if its one lol. But here it is. Made from my phone. Yaay tech these days.

Lyrics: 

Verse 1

Why don't you take my hand
stop everything and make other plans
I want to leave with you tonight

but baby lets take it slow
dance to the rhythm
just let it go
There's just one thing on my mind

pre chorus

why don't you take control
pull my body and hold me close
ill get lost into your eyes
Play the music all night long
dance to the rhythm
from dusk till dawn
I know what I wanna do

chorus
oh oh oh oh oh
I wanna dance with you tonight
oh oh oh oh
forget everything that's on my mind

Verse 2

Why don't you wait and see
move to the beat and just let it be
baby don't you feel the heat

tell me how your feeling now
wanna go back or leave the crowd
There's something I want to say

pre chorus

why don't you lose control
pull my body and hold me close
tonight you will be mine
Play the music all night long
dance to the rhythm
from dusk till dawn
I know what I want from you

Chorus
oh oh oh oh oh
I wanna dance with you tonight
oh oh oh oh
forget everything that's on my mind

Bridge

dance with you tonight

Chorus
oh oh oh oh oh
I wanna dance with you tonight
oh oh oh oh
forget everything that's on my mind



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Comments

headfirstonly's picture

That BIG kick drum says this is dance music, and there's no way I am going to argue with it. And this has an infectious, Latin beat to it that demands you get up and groove. I can easily imagine Shakira recording a version of this...

Might be worth bringing the keys up in the break; I could tell they were there, but that was about it.

Makes me want to dance. Let me go bother the wife..., - later Fool yeehaww!
- It's perfect

dzd's picture

Oh wow this is really great! Blend of latin and eastern rhythms methinks, and a superb vocal even by the high standards I'm going to hold you to Biggrin Really great work here. I would definitly call that a dancing song!! I was pretty dragging ass tired and it picked me up......at least while it was playing, g'nite!

musicsongwriter's picture

Gorgeous song, singing and playing. It just drew me in from the first notes. So catchy, full of life, energy and inspiration. If my voice was good I'd join you in singing. I can imagine people joining in, sing along atmosphere of people singing and dancing while your song sounds. Love it.
You wrote on your soundcloud profile that you believe in miracles. Your song Is a Miracle! It makes people feel better!

cblack's picture

This was awesome! Very professionally done. The vocals were terrific, the music was pleasing, they slotted together perfectly, and regardless of the sound quality (which was awesome) this also shows great songwriting. Can't believe you did this on your phone!

Truly incredible. Smile

Donna Devine's picture

It's ABSOLUTELY a dance song. Smile Lovely, positive lyric, and compelling melody and vocals. A real treat. Smile

cts's picture

Who wouldn’t want to dance to this? The arrangement is incredible and your vocals lift the lyrics and narrative to another sensory level. Nothing hyperbolic here...this is a great song. I’m glad I discovered it. Smile

kahlo's picture

Yes!!!! This is a fabulous dance song with a wonderfully sensual feel with the hot music and suggestive lyrics. The oooh oooh aas are really effective as is the repetition. Works brilliantly! Your vocals are superb! Love this come on dance song!!!

sunnymae's picture

This is a very cool track. I really like your beats and the hook is super memorable. Totally danceable and I love your voice!

Wolf Kier's picture

more fine pop from you. Loving the latin flavor, the lovely vocal and the oohoohooh hook is the winner here.
Good stuff.

coolparadiso's picture

amazing done with your phone - this is a great dance song! radio ready for sure. love it!

McTown's picture

wow... made with your phone... well, you have a very nice and sweet vocal sound...David