Strange Days

Strange Days

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Strange Days
c. 2021 by Sharon Stepler

No turning back on this road we’re traveling on
No way to tell where it goes
Blind turns and shadows hide what lies ahead
Where it leads nobody knows

Strange days
Strange times
Chaos calls to me in perfect rhymes
Strange joys
Strange tears
One step ahead of my fears

Maps are useless in an uncharted land
Passing through the great unknown
Voices calling out to help along the way
Yet we each must walk alone

Strange days
Strange times
Chaos calls to me in perfect rhymes
Strange joys
Strange tears
One step ahead of my fears

Strange days
Strange times
Chaos calls to me in perfect rhymes
Strange joys
Strange tears
One step ahead of my fears



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coolparadiso's picture

very nice - the fear of the unknown is strong! particularly in these strange days

mike skliar's picture

nice- some fun lines "chaos calls to me in perfect rhymes' is a great 50/90 or fawm mission statement! Smile

Roddy's picture

I like your 'no turning back' line it fits well with the strange days theme and your powerful journey images.

Cicpisces's picture

Love the poetic nature of this song. Strong chorus. Sweet emotion in the vocal. Good write.

corinne54's picture

The chorus is great! The entire lyric is really well written, complemented by a lovely melody

tjeff's picture

I like your take on the prompt of being on a journey. Some of my favorite lines - "blind turns and shadows," chaos calls to me in perfect rhymes," maps are useless in an uncharted land." I enjoyed listening!

kahlo's picture

Love the journey you take us on. The guitar sounds wonderful and I like the chord progression you used. As always your vocals are so strong, clear and beautiful as you take us on this emotional and insightful journey. The verses develop the concept well and the chorus is wonderfully concise and powerful. Great skirmish!

Sunfire's picture

Lovely vocal performance and the lyric is very well written and easy to relate to.

wacha's picture

This is a wonderful take on the prompt, that chorus is impressive and very catchy. This is a solid, engaging folk tune. Really nice skirmishing!

Jibbidy34's picture

Hi Sharon! Lovely folk song! This is amazing work for a skirmish. Catchy chorus and solid writing!