Take a Chance (Pick a Card)

Take a Chance (Pick a Card)

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Liner Notes: 

This is about a guy who goes to visit the fortune teller who has already determined his fate. Lol

Thank you @scubed for hosting the skirmish and for the theme.

Lyrics: 

Take a Chance (Pick a Card)

(Spoken Intro) - 1st 4 lines
Hi, I'm the Gypsy Queen
Mmm nice to meet you
Come in and sit down
Let's get right to this

Take a chance
Pick a card
Then relax
It's not hard
To let me guide you to your fate
The future awaits it's never too late

Maybe there's love
Maybe there's not
Maybe your heart
Is close to the spot
Where a change is coming soon

So take a chance
Pick a card
Then relax
It's not hard
To let me guide you to your fate
The future awaits, it's never too late

Will there be joy
Will you be sad
Will there be peace
Or will you be mad
When desinty is so close

Now the truth is
I wanna be your lover
And every card I have
Says just that ..................but it's for you to discover

So take a chance
Pick a card
Then relax
It's not hard
To let me guide you to your fate
The future awaits, it's never too late

For you and me

Sunfire © 2021



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Comments

Valerie Cox's picture

Fun twist on your fortune teller story! You've done a fine job here with the skirmish. Really well developed theme. This has has more depth than most things I spend 3 hours on. :P

pokerowan's picture

I really like your stanza layout! That switch from ABCBDD to just five lines really makes the lyrics pop.

Roddy's picture

Very good writing. You really nailed the pick a card theme.

kahlo's picture

Wonderful skirmish write! I like the concept and how you developed it! Wonderful structure and cadence as well.

cindyrella's picture

In some ways a little like my idea, but better in so many ways. Good skirmish!

Jibbidy34's picture

Ooh that was a fun twist! I have this image in my head of a deck of cards with ‘I Wanna Be Your Lover’ written on each one. Neat imagery!

Scubed's picture

Delightful response to the skirmish prompt! I really like the twisty happy ending. Nicely done!