Doctor
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Demo:
Liner Notes:
Made this on my phone in garageband and earphones and yay this is the product lol.
Lyrics:
Verse 1
Doctor doctor I need help
I’ve been feeling so unwell
Can you prescribe me with some pills
Cause I've been feeing so unwell
Pre chorus
And I know that everything happening is going down
And I know everything that I do wont help me out
and I know what I know that I do and I do need help
Chorus
Can you take a closer look at me now
Cause I've been feeling so fucked up somehow
I've tried everything to be sane/better somehow
I'm so sick and tired I want to back out now
Verse 2
Doctor doctor can you help
With the feelings that I dealt
I just want a way to heal
Get it all out of my chest
Pre chorus
And I know that I did everything that was so wrong
And I know and I do I've been feeling lost, for long
Everything that i love is broken and shattered
I want to get better
Chorus
Can you take a closer look at me now
Cause I've been feeling so fucked up somehow
I've tried everything to be sane/better somehow
I'm so sick and tired I want to back out now
Bridge
All I want is to heal
All I want is to feel
All I want is to be
Be better
Chorus
Can you take a closer look at me now
Cause I've been feeling so fucked up somehow
I've tried everything to be sane/better somehow
I'm so sick and tired I want to back out now
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Comments
Holy hell! This sounds amazing! I liked this when I just saw the lyric, but not near this much
Great job on the backing track too! It's busy enough I kept intrigued but does nothing to take away from your amazing vocal on this.
Great, great stuff! wow.
Thank you its because of you and ustaknow i learned so much so i am always grateful to you guys.
Wow, you achieved so much with your phone! Your voice is affecting. I’m inspired, thank you. I really enjoyed this - you held my attention to the end, such good use of a simple melody
Thank you
love the way you belt it out against thosr amazing rhythms coming off the piano. the breaks work really well too. the melodies hold those words securely as you sail up and down the scales.
Thank you
Love the synchopated piano & how you build everything else on top of that. Wonderfully done! And those vocals - wow!
See You In The Shadows…
Thank you Candle and I Love your music too, I am a secret fan. I heard your song on fawm.
Well, I guess it's not so secret anymore
Thank you!
See You In The Shadows…
Clearly, a lot of thought has gone into how to put this piece together, but it doesn't feel overwrought. At all. Passionate and emotive without being overindulgent, and surprisingly poppy given the melancholic elements.
A very astute song, but one that I nonetheless listened to with my heart rather than my head. This is a standout.
Thank you
Very beautiful and original song. Your vocals are absolutely amazing. They shine through the song making it extra special. Very interesting story to follow. Amazing listen although I have to admit, I didn't use headphones as I prefer listening without them.
Thank you
So great. Fantastic phone recording. Your lyrics and vocals are totally engaging. Your beautiful singing works perfectly with the music, which is well done by itself. Impressive piece of music.
Totally enjoyed this. Compelling vocals, tight lyric, music that very much holds its own without being overwhelming. Good work!
WOW. I wasn't sure what to expect but this is fantastic. Your vocals are fantastic and that piano riff is great. Love how it's chopped up and then you added additional elements. This is a really well done!
Very dramatic piano riff and hyper contemporary-sounding vocals. Could totally envision this on the radio, with perhaps a word change in the chorus.
Great job!
DAYUM! Not sure I can add anything meaningful to the comments already here, but this is amazing. Love the lyrics and your delivery is phenomenal. Absolutely radi-ready.
Wow! Great melody and vocal delivery. Love the rhythmic music that creates a great stage for your gorgeous vocals to shine. I like the call for help and the insight in the lyrics.
This is so assured, and so complete - love that intro so much - probably my favourite opening I've heard this 50/90 for what it's worth. But that sounds like damning with faint praise: it isn't! The whole thing is incredible. Found this because of the recommendations thread.
this tune is dope! love the rhythms in your phrasing AND in the changes between verse and chorus. you voice is so real and delivers these super honest lyrics! the whole package is fabulous. i could listen to this tune over and over. great production job and super tune!
One word is all I have: amazing.