She's Got A Presence

She's Got A Presence

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Liner Notes: 

I'm away from home so this was recorded in one hit on a guitar missing its top E (and a significant strip of wood from the front of the body. Ouch!).

Secretly I can't wait to make this into a huge song.

Lyrics: 

Got me a little stretch of morning
Streaking across the seams
Struck with a sudden connection
Taken up to extremes
I want to get up early to talk with her
And I’m frightened of what it means
I feel like I’m lying and barely trying ‘cos
She’s switching up my routines

Ah, I’m sorry for keeping you up
Ah, I hardly believe my luck

Is it too much?
I almost don't care if it was
Woah-oh, she's got a presence
Coming up flushed
Got a crush, got a crush, Got a
Woah-oh, she's got a presence

Ah, I’m sorry for keeping you up
Ah, woah-oh she’s got a presence

Just about to hit four forty
You’re in the middle of your day
Sometimes I think my timezone isn’t
Keeping my feelings at bay
I wanna be the friend you come to
When you have a minute to waste
My blood is roaring, my heart is pouring
I’m flooded with thoughts of mistakes

Ah, I’m sorry for keeping you up
Ah, You know me deeply enough

Is it too much?
I almost don't care if it was
Woah-oh, she's got a presence
Coming up flushed
Got a crush, got a crush, Got a
Woah-oh, she's got a presence

Ah, I’m sorry for keeping you up
Ah, woah-oh she’s got a presence

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Is it too much?
I almost don't care if it was
Woah-oh, she's got a presence
Is it too much?
I almost don't care if it was
Woah-oh, she's got a presence
Is it too much?
I almost don't care if it was
(Woah-oh, she's got a presence)
Coming up flushed
Got a crush, got a crush, Got a
(Woah-oh, she's got a presence)



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Comments

its huge enough already but yup will be a monster with big production. very catchy, nice straight to the point lyric. cool

mike skliar's picture

this is wonderful- so many great lines, it all flows as a literate and engrossing internal monologue that resonates and illuminates.
music fits well with the lyric too, that quiet conversational tone works well with this.

crisp1's picture

Very sweet number about the shock -- and pleasure -- when love first bites you.

cleanshoes's picture

Sweet, mellow, toe-tapping goodness. Perfectly captures those early days of a crush. Great lyrical flow--a song to have on repeat for sure!

Robyn Mackenzie's picture

Love those "ah"s in the chorus! Fantastic lyrics and your voice is lovely. This brings me right back to high school and my first girl crush.

ZsuzsaDoe's picture

Yes yes yes, so sweet. Do make it a huge song please!

alyxanderjames's picture

Oh, I love this - you've captured the energy of a crush so well here! I would love to hear this built up into a whole production, but this simple rendition is also fabulous.