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  bong


JOINED:49 weeks ago
PROGRESS:50  50 songs  Winner!
LOCATION:Denmark
WEBSITE:
INFLUENCES:Beatles Led Zeppelin Genesis J.J. Cale Scott Joplin David Bowie Kate Bush Grateful Dead ABBA 10CC Kid Creole Astor Piazzolla ... I like SONGS, melodies, stories.

 
BIO:

***** DEAR COLLABORATORS! ************************************************

Please read this forum post: http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/all-who-collaborated and submit your acceptance.

***** bong ************************************************
OK, a winner of sorts, but I do not have 50 songs to show, and that annoys me. I am working on those you see here. Collabs are welcome on titles marked (+), cf. http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/boost-your-count-collabs.

***** Recording ************************************************

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***** Musicking ************************************************

***** Lyricking ************************************************

***** Sweating (these are ideas) ************************************************

***** Most recent recordings ************************************************

***** My history in The 20 Song Game ************************************************
3. http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/20-song-game-2011-10-01-saturday (nine melodies, one song)
2. http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/20-song-game-2011-09-30-friday (one song)
1. http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/20-songs-12-hours-saturday-septem... (two songs)
http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/immersion-music-method-20-song-ga...

***** MY PAGES ************************************************
Facebook fan pages - http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/content/facebook-fan-pages
My Facebook fan page - http://www.facebook.com/pages/Bong-Crescendo/165008803556055
Reverbnation - http://www.reverbnation.com/bongcrescendo
YouTube - http://www.youtube.com/user/bongCrescendo
Fawm 2011 "album" - http://www.rippler.dk/albums/1.%20fawm%202011.html

If you upload 5090 videos, they will be linked here, and I will probably listen to all of them. And friend you on YouTube.
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL611BAE9B9FA750A5 - Like the jukebox, but 5090 videos.

***** MY HISTORY ************************************************
I played guitar (nylon strings) for 30 years - classical, ragtime, anything. I started playing covers in Second Life - to beat my stage fright. Seriously. And it worked to some degree, I can survive physically on a stage (a real one). I quickly added singing; I am not entirely satisfied with the sound of my own voice, but I think I can sing to a degree.

That was in the summer of 2009. A funny thing happened in spring 2010. I saw a text by someone on a forum, I snatched it, and turned it into a song in about an hour. I was flabbergasted. I had been pondering for a long time how you write music, and there it was. And there I was, just looking at it. It was crap, but it was complete. Not complete crap, mind you, but complete in the sense that you could not improve it.

And then the exact same thing happened a couple of weeks later (same author). Still crappy, but complete. Even though none of them were keepers it was a major break-through, and a thrill. I started studying songwriting seriously (even took a course).

And then to test myself I auditiioned for the Danish X Factor 2011. Remember my stage fright? I got three nays from the three judges, but the experience as a whole was OK.

Here is my view on song writing. It's a skill, or several subskills, and they can be trained. That is what we are doing in fawm & 5090.

I am really glad I did a lot of covers first.

***** MUSIC STYLES ************************************************
Plural. I have some styles that fall naturally, and some that I would not think of attempting unless provoked or by chance. I think my list of influences will tell you what there is to say.

***** MOST PROUD OF ************************************************

Both are around 100 years old.

Songs: 50            ( + = Songs posted by a different Songwriter that you Collaborated on.)
Title Collaborators Comments Post date
1 Dressed In Red (Resignation)
Demofav
colourcodedchaos 11 45 weeks 4 days
2 Two Bloody Licks
Demo
5 45 weeks 2 days
3 Massacre For Wellington
Demo
3 45 weeks 1 day
4 Guadalcanal (Lie In Wait)
Demofav
9 45 weeks 1 day
5 Naked, Eternal And Astral
YouTube
2 44 weeks 6 days
6 Why Tell Me ***
Lyrics Only
2 44 weeks 4 days
7 Til Min Barnedåb ***
Lyrics Only
timwille 1 44 weeks 2 days
8 Words Of Cruelness ***
Lyrics Only
0 44 weeks 1 day
9 Nameless Woman
Demo
8 44 weeks 1 day
10 I Can't Even Fetch My Hat (Lucky)
Demofav
3 44 weeks 1 day
11 Terror (Shooter)
Demo
4 43 weeks 2 days
12 Some Kind Of Man (I Understand Him)
Demo
2 43 weeks 1 day
13 Strange Creatures (Unfamiliar And Unforgiving)
Demo
5 43 weeks 1 day
14 + I Don't Care For Numbers
Demo
Winner bong
Arthur Rossi
2 43 weeks 1 day
15 My Banjo Pants ***
Lyrics Only
2 42 weeks 4 days
16 Hunger In The Eyes
Demofavfeast
4 42 weeks 1 day
17 + At Hello
Demofav
Winner bong
lefty013
1 42 weeks 1 day
18 My Good Life
Demofav
1 41 weeks 1 day
19 Decompose
YouTube
6 39 weeks 1 day
20 The Soul Of Rock'n Roll
Demofav
3 37 weeks 2 days
21 MPK mini test
Demofeast
0 36 weeks 1 day
22 At A Mushroom Party
Demo
1 35 weeks 2 days
23 Humming Bee
Demofeast
1 35 weeks 1 day
24 Hey, Mister!
Demo
1 35 weeks 1 day
25 My Town Is Waking Up
Demofeast
2 35 weeks 1 day
26 Beautiful Mistakes
Demo
1 35 weeks 1 day
27 Jeg hader cykler [in Danish]
Demo
1 34 weeks 5 days
28 Jeg er lottomillionær [in Danish]
Demofav
1 34 weeks 1 day
29 Stop That Thing You're Doing
Demofav
1 34 weeks 1 day
30 I'm A Lotto Millionaire
Demofav
1 33 weeks 6 days
31 31-G **
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
32 32-C ***
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
33 33-E **
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
34 34-em ***
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
35 35-A ***
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
36 36-G ***
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
37 37-A Annoying ***
Demofeast
1 33 weeks 2 days
38 38-G **
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
39 39-dm **
Demofeast
0 33 weeks 2 days
40 Poker
Demofeast
3 33 weeks 2 days
41 Money for pizza ***
Lyrics Only
0 33 weeks 2 days
42 Pizza toppings
Demo
1 33 weeks 2 days
43 Revolution 50 *
0 33 weeks 2 days
44 Tonight's Concert *
0 33 weeks 2 days
45 Tackyman *
0 33 weeks 2 days
46 Online Tests
Demo
0 33 weeks 1 day
47 Unsung Heroes ***
Lyrics Only
1 33 weeks 1 day
48 How To Rhyme **
Lyrics Only
1 33 weeks 1 day
49 Can't Be Arsed **
Lyrics Only
Donated Calum Carlyle 0 33 weeks 1 day
50 Fiftieth Song
Demo
2 33 weeks 1 day


Soundboard


Hey, whassup! If you put a comment here or on one of my songs, I will probably put you on my watchlist for a while. Then I might hear you on the jukebox, and I might comment on your songs.

My email address is bkvp86@mail.umkc.edu

I hereby grant my co-writers permission to perform our song in public, even a paid job, even by proxy. And my collaborators can use the song non-commercially. (Commercial use is a different thing.)

Lyrics on "At Hello" should be creditted to Beth Vernon, should the matter ever come up.

Comment by bong
TYSM, beth/lefty013.

Congratulations on reaching 50! And with your new PM. I hope your freezer is filled with meat and pizzas...

Wow - well done for making that last-minute rush. Amazing!

Congrats on your winner status. You rock!

Okay, I added you as a collab. Record and post at your leisure.

By the way, on another note, if you like the song to appear more topical we could delete this post and re-post it again... to me it makes no difference, so I would like to leave it to you...

Hey bong! I am listening to this wonderful tango and can`t stop doing so... I am fascinated... Thanks a lot for this wonderful music, I love it! Very good solution also concerning the 1st half of the chorus! I love this genre of music and especially the melody of this song. Congratulations, you created something really wonderful... and I am very, very grateful for that... Thanks a lot!

Hey bong! Thanks a lot for the great news, can`t wait to hear the demo! I am sorry for not answering you earlier, I was very busy yesterday… In regrad of the first half of the chorus, this would be my suggestion:

I don`t care for numbers,
I don`t even know what they mean,
bet even in sweet slumber
she dreams the square root of nineteen…

Anyway, please, feel free to alter anything you would like to or to use your ideas if you regard them as more appropriate. If you like you can also let me know what you think about it and I could try to figure another one up…

Comment by bong
I don`t care for numbers, I don`t even know what they mean, she dreams in her sweet slumber, of square roots of six and nineteen

Hey bong! I was very happy when reading your email. I would look very forward if you gave it a go… Of course, you can alter anything as you like, be it for stylistical/logical improvement, be it because of rhythmical reasons. I`d love to hear it in that musical way as you suggested!
Concerning the ownership of the rights, you are very generous, that generous I would feel bad about it… Finally, it is you who does the main „job“ and main work, I am only the one who wrote some words… However, if you like, we can share them as you suggested, anyway, I think it would be fairer if I suggested 75-25 in your favour, 75% you, 25% me… As I said, it is you who does the majority of the work and this should also be recognized…
Thanks once again, I can`t wait to hear it!

Hey Bong! Thanks a lot for your comment and the congratulations! I would look very forward to a collab with you and I am happy that you are getting back on track now. I love especially „Resignation“, „Hunger in the Eyes“ and „Decompose“ of yours, very beautiful songs… You asked me for some suggestions in regard of the choice of the lyrics… A general problem that I have noticed is that I tend to get „too wordy“ (though it got better now in comparison to the length of the songtexts once I wrote) and your songs often suit shorter sets of lyrics. Taking this and the style of your music into consideration, I`d suggest one of the following songtexts:

-„you are mine“: http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/songs/8927
-„a girl like you“: http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/songs/8465
-„I don`t care for numbers“: http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/songs/8718
-„keep relaxed“: http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/songs/8859

Anyway, these would be only my suggestions. Please, feel free to chose also any other if you like and if you find one that would suit your style… I`d look forward to it…
kind regards

Hi bong, I read your email, I look very forward to our collab this week. We can handle it the way you like, if you find (or maybe you already did) anything you think you could eventually use, you can go ahead, if you liked me to write new lyrics to a special topic/in a special style etc. (whatever), it would be also ok with me... Please, let me know how we will continue,
kind regards

Thanks for the comment :)

No problem! It's an awesome track :) And hopefully I will; I get paid on Thursday so I shall be going to DMT ASAP to buy a new mic :) Or I could risk my life digging for a super old one that is seriously no good for some acapella demos for the time being XD

Thank you for including Happy Birthday video :)

Winner  bong
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http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL611BAE9B9FA750A5 - Like the jukebox, but 5090 videos.

Hey, thanks for popping by and leaving a comment on http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/songs/8002 - its kinda interesting that you think its worth the work.

Thanks a lot for your comment. :)

Thanks for the comment on Too Bloody Licks.
Normally I'm fairly ok with playing around with pronunciation in general (which is far cry everyday life - I'm known as the Grammar Nazi in my circles), so I wasn't too worried about the com-PLAIN and confi-DENCE. But, your feedback prompted me to listen to it again and the com-PLAIN really jarred, mostly because of the big group of consonants I think.
I think I've reworked it to:
"oh it's strange to be complaining about too much confidence"
Think that works a little better.

Thanks for the comments! Its weird, I've had people say Bowie, Lennon, Jagger, and early t-Rex and I've only really Listened to Lennon. (I should really listen to more music.)

bong, by "horrible", I hope you're referring to the event rather than the demo? (-: LOL

LOL!

love your post in the Rhyme is a Lie thread.

Wow you get around don't you in the music world. LOL!