Lost on Razor Thin Lines of Tipping Points

Lost on Razor Thin Lines of Tipping Points

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Another quick combo of 2 awesome skirmish prompts that were posted while I was asleep and that I was excited to find this morning

D thin line, tipping point, mountains at margins
E lost, misplaced

This lyric to me is about feeling lost on that tipping point where the indecision will tip you over the edge

Collaboration welcome!

Lyrics: 

V1
it’s black or white
it’s loose or tight
it’s fight or flight
it’s alright
just alright
just alright

it’s night or day
it’s work or play
it’s go or stay
it’s okay
just okay
just okay

C
we hear frightful
screams in silence
we chase passionate
dreams in darkness
we find changing
themes in nothing
we see disturbing
schemes in margins

as we stumble
lost in place
saving face
on razor thin lines
of tipping points

V2
it’s us or them
it’s now or then
it’s who or when
it’s again
just again
just again

it’s chained or free
it’s blind or see
it’s you or me
it’s degrees
just degrees
just degrees

C
we hear frightful
screams in silence
we chase passionate
dreams in darkness
we find changing
themes in nothing
we see disturbing
schemes in margins

as we stumble
lost in place
saving face
on razor thin lines
of tipping points

B
we’ll hear
we’ll chase
we’ll find
we’ll see
chaos in our destiny
we’ll fall
we’ll crash
we’ll bruise
we’ll bleed
victims of our entropy

OUTRO
as we stumble
lost in place
saving face
on razor thin lines
of tipping points



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Comments

headfirstonly's picture

Really like this. The structure of the chorus in particular (the repeated "we x in y") is really satisfying, even if I can't put why that should be into words. I also like the science fiction flavour!

AndyGetch's picture

Oh my this has punk anthem written all over it. Well done!

Spazsquatch's picture

Wow, this is GREAT! The phrase "we see disturbing schemes in margins" is just packed full of ideas.

Hope someone puts it to music because I want to hear it so bad.

dzd's picture

Another really great skirmish mashup! I don't want to make any promises as we are winding down and don't know when exactly I'd get to it(tonight if its gonna happen) but I wouldn't mind doing this one. It would probably be loud and screamy Biggrin