She's a Dream

She's a Dream

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just woke up singing the chorus so made a quick song. any thoughts appreciated.

Lyrics: 

Verse 1
She came and spoke to me
much to my disbelief
there were so many other options in the room
She wanted to know me
maybe I looked lonely
oh the moment it ended too soon

Chorus
All I could think
was where have you been all my life
All I could think
was why me? why oh why?
she could have anyone she likes
cause she's a dream
oh she's a dream

Verse 2
She gave me a hug
it felt like a drug
covered me in a tingling sensation
She gave me a kiss
it felt like bliss
Hope I didn't misread the situation

Chorus
All I could think
was where have you been all my life
All I could think
was why me? why oh why?
she could have anyone she likes
cause she's a dream
oh she's a dream

Bridge
she makes me want to drool
Yeah I wanna be her fool
all I could do was stare
when she released her long dark hair
Oh I wish I could pause time
in this dream of mine

Chorus
All I could think
was where have you been all my life
All I could think
was why me? why oh why?
she could have anyone she likes
cause she's a dream
oh she's a dream



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Comments

cts's picture

Verse 2 I can strongly relate to. I was reminded of someone I liked in HS. There was a similar encounter and the feelings mentioned in the verse were the same feelings I had. I also had the same thoughts about whether the situation was going anywhere beyond that moment. This is a solid write and it's always cool when the song comes together rather easily...especially the chorus.

Donna Devine's picture

A pretty tight write for five minutes, Stevie. Smile Sometimes it just slots into place, eh? Really nice chorus. And I especially like lines 1 & 2 in the bridge.