Ritual in Rock

Ritual in Rock

Zeekle's picture
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Liner Notes: 

For the skirmish prompt - Ritual - and I have no idea what I was actually writing about but went with the flow...

Thanks Wacha for the prompt

Lyrics: 

Ritual in Rock ©J Challis 2021

You prey
Eyes on the prize
There’s a certain way
It’s there in your eyes

You’re the ritualistic man hunter
Always on the prowl
You follow you Ritual pattern
To land that man anyhow

The curl of a lip
Ohh ohh a pout
No man can resist
You have this planned out

You’re the ritualistic man hunter
Always on the prowl
You follow you Ritual pattern
To land that man anyhow

One look – got me paralysed
One move – you take me by surprise

The way you move
Like a tiger on the floor
Keeping to the same groove
They all want more more more

You’re the ritualistic man hunter
Always on the prowl
You follow you Ritual pattern
To land that man anyhow



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Comments

kenmattsson's picture

You took this in a very different way than I did, but I really like it. Nice guitar work.

Roddy's picture

Such a full sound. The guitars are very good. Excellent work for a skirmish.

dzd's picture

I find this pretty hilarious. Not in a bad way at all. I think its the very serious guitars(some amazing tones in there!) and the full bored delivery are what's selling it for me. If this was done ultra goofy(how I'd of probably done it) I don't think I'd like it near as much. Some of those squeals are searing and sound excellent! Great work!

AndreaB's picture

Cool song. I love the music. Totally enjoyed this song.

Might suggest you switch these 2 lines:

"One look – got me paralysed
One move – you take me by surprise"

Sunfire's picture

I like the direction you took this in. Very good! There's definitely a ritual in rock. Great title and good vibes and sounds.

wacha's picture

That intro guitar note reminds me of "Barracuda" a little and I LOVE it! There is solid, gritty rock tune here. Those guitars are think and have so much attitude in them, like a really god bar band in a dive bar. Really nice take on the prompt, thanks for playing!

kahlo's picture

Ohhh… this rocks brilliantly! Love that bass riff and the great guitars and punchy delivery of the great lyrics! Fabulous song!

chrismyth02's picture

Cool bass line, love the soloing that comes in right away... cool tone, the way it sits back a little in the mix. Chorus and verse riffs drive the song along well. I dig the vocals too, they complement the song and vibe well. Cool track!