Time to Give in

Time to Give in

StevieJ's picture

Liner Notes: 

wrote this in about 5 minutes. Probably not the finished artical but any feedback would be great.

Lyrics: 

Verse 1
What happened to the I love you's?
it used to be on the daily news
now it's all about war
and wanting more
not much left to desire
not much left to adore

Chorus
Our time is closing in
we've tried and we've tried
but there's no way to win
feels like it's a sin
we've tried and we've tried
had the time of our lives
now it's time to give in

Verse 2
what happened to the kiss goodbye?
it used be in full supply
now it's almost sold out
like some kind of drought
not much left to consider
not much left to think about

Chorus
Our time is closing in
we've tried and we've tried
but there's no way to win
feels like it's a sin
we've tried and we've tried
had the time of our lives
now it's time to give in

Bridge
this demise is an unwanted surprise
can't even look you in the eyes
can we share just one final kiss
before we say goodbye

Chorus
Our time is closing in
we've tried and we've tried
but there's no way to win
feels like it's a sin
we've tried and we've tried
had the time of our lives
now it's time to give in



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Comments

dzd's picture

Don't know how you hear it, but it reads very nicely and very almost piano/guitar ballad? I really like the metaphorical verses nothing but bad news/droughts/etc. Nice strong chorus as well. Great write!