One Last Time

One Last Time

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Off the back of yesterday's collab with @metalfoot I had another go at EDM using some of Gwyn's lyrics. I chose a guitar riff that would shape the rhythm of the whole song; guitar 2 and bass both had the same motif in harmony. I then did the same with my vocals. I'm hoping it kinda achieves the objective!

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ONE LAST TIME
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One last time and then we’re done
One last night of having fun
One last road down which to run
And finish on a high
One last spinning of the wheel
One last moment to reveal
One to one, just how we feel
Before we say goodbye

One last time and then we’re done
One last night of having fun
One last road down which to run
And finish on a high

One last time and then we’re done
One last night of having fun
One last road down which to run
And finish on a high
One last spinning of the wheel
One last moment to reveal
One to one, just how we feel
Before we say goodbye

Better make the most of us
Better drink a toast to us
Best leave the ghost of us

One last time and then we’re done
One last night of having fun
One last road down which to run
And finish on a high
One last spinning of the wheel
One last moment to reveal
One to one, just how we feel
Before we say goodbye

One Last Time
One Last Time
One Last Time
One Last Time
One Last Time



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The kick drum - oh, yeah! Nice mashup of rock and edm. Love the vocals!

Valerie Cox's picture

Yeah! Big rock anthem sound with a dance beat. Very cool. You crushed this challenge!

billwhite51's picture

great job of matching your vocal to the guitar riff and adding vocal effects that mix well with the guitar.

colgoo's picture

Way to attack this challenge! Great work!

richaaaay's picture

Interesting to hear your take on week2 challenge. You definitely attacked it head on with success. Driving riff and drum beat carry the song through. Nice job on the vocals too.

coolparadiso's picture

Nice match - has a really late Beatles feel - with that wail guitar. Drums really nail it

Gm7's picture

Rock on!!! Love the guitar and drums. NICE job

wobbie wobbit's picture

oooh that opening is great. great dirty sound. love the riff. love the bends. nice shape overall. such a whole song and great genre variety. great lyrics and concept - love it!

davidtaro's picture

Wow. That riff is filthy and utterly brilliant! Works so well with the EDM beats (agree with @sbs2018 - that kick is extraordinary). It’s a very very cool track, well done Smile

dzd's picture

Great take on the challenge! Definitely fufilled the rhythm, that kick and main riff sound great, as does your vocal cadence. Love, love, the 2nd guitar line, and all the little washy and wavy subtleties in the drum, really drew me in and keeps it intriguing through the whole thing. Great lyric too, super hooky and really catchy and fun stuff, great song to perform when nobody really knows wtf you're saying anyway Biggrin Really enjoyed this a lot!

splittybooms's picture

I like the hard drums on this and that sawy/sweepy/buzzy bass that swells in and out under that nice guitar riff.
Definitely keeps the ears interested. Nice choice having the vocals mimic the guitar - that sounds really cool.
Nice touches with extra bits of flourish sweeps and sparkly synths added here and there.
Nailed the challenge in my opinion with a great sounding track.

Jerry Pettit's picture

Dang, this is so good. I'm going to try and get my first 25 songs done and then start doing some more "experimental" stuff--stretch my wings a little.

Great music, although I'm still mostly a huge fan of your vocals. This is just great! Great lyrics, Gwyn!!

musicsongwriter's picture

Very cool take on the challenge. Enjoyable to listen to and to want to join the beat and the heat. Yes it's hot and cool at the same time. Brilliant lyrics, music, instrumentation, playing and of course singing. Great vibes!