The Smell of You

The Smell of You

richaaaay's picture
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Liner Notes: 

Proving I'm not very good at skirmishing...technical difficulties, writer's block, no part B. All that said, it's a start...

Lyrics: 

The smell of love
Fire burning bright
Smokey clothes
About last night

Coffee brewing
I’m stewing
In the smell of you



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Comments

kahlo's picture

I love the slow jazzy evocative feel and the spares lyrics. You convey so much and take me camping with a a lover …. Wonderful take on the skirmish!

wobbie wobbit's picture

you do hit a rich vein with what you do say, definitely and interesting concept - l like it!

Old Lost John's picture

Cool laid back lazy feel. For such a short lyric it delivers a lot to picture and imagine.

billwhite51's picture

you have such a cool sound on that guitar. maybe when you are not constrained by skirmish time limits, you can develop the song some. i really like what you have going on here.

wacha's picture

That arrangement is solid. There is a great jazzy feel to this that works nicely with the lyrics. I think this is worth revisiting when you have the time.

Wolf Kier's picture

Lovely chill atmosphere underlined by that pensive solo guitar. grrat work for a skirmish! enjoyed my listen.
Thanks for all your great feedback!

headfirstonly's picture

This really needs to be taken further. I think you can safely stop saying you're not good at skirmishes after producing something like this. I dunno if "Knopfleresque" is a real word, but I'm going to use it as an appropriate adjective here. Very much to my liking.