Chocolate Kiss

Chocolate Kiss

Amanda West's picture
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Written in about 35 mins for Superskirmish H, theme: Ride

Thank you for reading and stay safe Smile

Lyrics: 

V1
The noise is deafening
From the clackers on my wheels
As I race down Howard's Hill
Like a boat without a keel

Chorus
I'm riding on the wind
(Riding on the wind)
Like a teenage purple witch
All fresh and olive skinned
(fresh and olive skinned)
Longing for that chocolate kiss
(for that chocolate kiss)
I'm longing for that chocolate kiss to come

V2
Escape from News At Six
And the silence that ensues
'Cus we aren't allowed to talk
Unless we want a bruise

Chorus
I'm riding on the wind
(Riding on the wind)
Like a teenage purple witch
All fresh and olive skinned
(fresh and olive skinned)
Longing for that chocolate kiss
(for that chocolate kiss)
I'm longing for that chocolate kiss to come

Bridge
Dreaming of what's coming one day soon
And waiting for that night under the moon

Chorus
I'm riding on the wind
(Riding on the wind)
Like a teenage purple witch
All fresh and olive skinned
(fresh and olive skinned)
Longing for that chocolate kiss
(for that chocolate kiss)
I'm longing for that chocolate kiss to come



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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

Thats another goodie its so descriptive! Chocolate kisses eh! hmm interesting

Arthur Rossi's picture

Beautifully written lyrics, teeming with very vivid pictures. I also like the touch of romance like "And waiting for that night under the moon". The chorus is excellent and extremely singable and be absolutely catchy when put to music for sure. Great take on this skirmish!

Jibbidy34's picture

Ooh juicy juicy! So descriptive - I wanted to know more about the teenage witch! It reminded me of Hershey’s chocolate kisses when I was a kid. Best treat ever!

Belladonna's picture

Love the images your song evokes. Interesting and juicy. Nice song.

kahlo's picture

This has such a great cadence and I love the images and the details.

dzd's picture

Reads with a great melody, and choc'd full of imagery Wink Really strong chorus, and I'm intrigued about this purple witch Biggrin

Great write!

Edward Roussac's picture

I really like the abstract imagery in the lyrics! Very interesting read. Verse 2 is probably my favourite part of the song. Would be nice to hear it set to music.

Peter Arvidson's picture

I love riding on the wind Amanda! Words flow really nicely. If you're looking for a collab, I have some idea! Woot woot!

musicsongwriter's picture

Love the imagery in your lyrics Amanda. Hope to hear your collaboration with Peter.