That’s Not Exactly Me

That’s Not Exactly Me

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Skirmish Prompt: Delicious

Lyrics: 

That’s Not Exactly Me

V1
her lips would be delicious
her eyes would be delightful
her thoughts would be
as decadent as
dark chocolate
with merlot

C
oh that is the woman
I would love to know
and that is the woman
I would like be
but no
that’s not
exactly me

V2
her goals would be ambitious
her quirks would be attractive
her love would be
as affectionate as
loving hugs
before sleep

C2
oh that is the woman
I would love to meet
and that is the woman
I would like be
but no
that’s not
exactly me

V3
her laugh would be infectious
her mind would be insightful
her words would be
as irreverent as
clever puns and
limericks

C3
oh that is the woman
I would love to to kiss
and that is the woman
I would like be
but no
that’s not
exactly me

OUTRO
no I’m not perfect
in anyone’s eyes
I know that’s not
a shock or surprise
and I’m not ideal
or anyone’s prize
so would you be willing
to compromise?



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Comments

Sunfire's picture

I like the approach. Well written as always!

coolparadiso's picture

funny that but you just have to go with it! Nicely laid out story that unfolds and completes itself with the real question! And someone is perfect? nice skirmish

cindyrella's picture

I'd say you have most of these qualities and what a way to put it all in this fantastic lyrics!

Acousticmaddie's picture

Sweetie you are awesome. I think you top all these attributes. Great write.