So Sick

So Sick

QuothTheLlama's picture

Lyrics: 

So Sick

V1
I'm doing all the things you used to ask
But none if it will turn the time back
Maybe if I could just erase the past
You'd have chosen to stay

V2
Do you remember all those great, big plans
Way back, before our end began?
This crumpled map of our uncharted lands
That I can't throw away

Pre-Ch
And now I'm so sick from missing you
I'm so damn sick, what can I do?

Chorus
I just keep telling myself that I'm ok
Over and over again every day
But in the dark, the lies fall apart
And I can't sleep through this hurting heart
Tell me, how do I stop missing you?

V3
I think I'm starting to forget your face
Little details that I can't retrace
These fading memories I can't replace
Cause you're a stranger now

V4
Wish there was something that could fill this void
All this emptiness makes so much noise
But every now and then I hear your voice
Drift through this haunted house

Pre-Ch
And I'm still so sick from missing you
I'm so damn sick, what can I do?

Chorus
I just keep telling myself that I'm ok
Over and over again every day
But in the dark, the lies fall apart
And I can't sleep through this hurting heart
Tell me, how do I stop missing you?

Bridge
Maybe if I'd worked it out a year ago
I never would have had to
watch you walk out my door
And now I'm just so sick of missing you

Chorus
So I'll just keep telling myself that I'm ok
Over and over again every day
And in the dark, where lies fall apart
I still won't sleep through this hurting heart
Tell me, how do stop missing you?

Cause I'm so sick of missing you



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Comments

Marije's picture

I think these lyrics are great and could work well in a melancholic acoustic song or an angry punk song, it's really versatile. It flows really well and you paint a vivid picture of what a break-up looks and feels like. Well done!

coolparadiso's picture

Yup good lyrics, a well trodden path but enough interesting words and a good structure. Yup a melancholy delivery style would nail this! Nice one.

Mandolinda's picture

Heartache and the trials of moving on well described. I hear ya.

musicsongwriter's picture

Very beautiful sad lyrics. I hope to hear your demo. I've just heard your collaboration with Donna and Billy. Your voice is gorgeous!