Chandra83's picture



I sit still
And hold the knife
Replaying all
The mistakes of my life

I let you have
So much control
Choking me out
With your strangle hold

You made my life
Hell on earth
And left me questioning
All of my worth

I just want an ending
To all of this pain
And to give myself
Some peace again.

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Tim Fatchen's picture

I can empathise with this. All i want to say to the poor sould is "put the knife down and have a chat with me". Suicide is a waste and doesn't achieve anything other than extinction. pretty powerful in four stanzas.