Dissolving Dream (Now with a demo!)

Dissolving Dream (Now with a demo!)

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Wrote these at work about a week ago. Haven't found music that works with them yet, so I figured I should just post the lyrics. I might have had a Tea Party tune stuck in my head while I was writing this…

UPDATE SEPTEMBER 30, 2020
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Added a demo recorded this afternoon using Jeskola Buzz (of course!). This is mostly my strat, with HG Fortune's Astral Dreamer adding some backing ambience.

See You In The Shadows…

Lyrics: 

Dissolving Dream
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Turned on a dime
Because it was time
To place your final bet
You haven't lost yet
Visual misdirection cues
Serve only to confuse
In the end life will be
Glorious when you're free

You've wasted your hope
And now you must cope
With the dream dissolving away
You've wasted your hope
And now you must cope
With the dream dissolving away

Endangered demands
Have gotten out of hand
Priviledged expectations
Lost in a realm
Torn apart by a war
Where words are too poor
Truth now decried
Replaced now by spite

You've wasted your hope
And now you must cope
With the dream dissolving away
You've wasted your hope
And now you must cope
With the dream dissolving away



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

It feels like a Tea Party song, lyrically, so even though I can't place which song you had in mind, yes, the influence is there!

Good rhythm and feel to the lyric.

dzd's picture

Love the lyric and the vocal! that's a great overdriven rhythm too! I'm not uber familiar with a lot of tea party's stuff, have only heard one album that I can recall, but yeah nothing jumps out at me, I wouldn't of even noticed any similarity if you hadn't planted it in my head Biggrin but yeah lyrically sounds like something that too bad for them they didn't write Wink

HelioSonorouS's picture

Great track, the vocal effects stand out and there is an intense delivery out the gate, has a sense of urgency to it, has a good ending to the piece.