October Sunshine

October Sunshine

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Late to the party. Prompt: October Sunshine

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October Sunshine

Cool mornings
Moisture in the air
Sun on the rise
In windows there's a glare

October sunshine
Autumn leaves
Deeper into fall
Wearing shirts with long sleeves

Pumpkin carve
Hot apple cider
In the door way
The cobweb of a spider

October sunshine
Autumn leaves
Deeper into fall
Wearing shirts with long sleeves

Red sunsets
Evenings bring a chill
Could be a frost
Rare harvest moon a thrill

October sunshine
Autumn leaves
Deeper into fall
Wearing shirts with long sleeves



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dzd's picture

Great fall imagery here! really descriptive writing without being too long winded Biggrin a skill in and of itself.

Adnama17's picture

I am not a fan of cooler weather. Give me 100 degrees please! But all theses descriptions paint such a lovely picture. I can't help but stop and notice, and enjoy. Nicely done!

tjeff's picture

Very good simple and concise descriptive writing that sets the mood of the fall season well. Nice skirmish!