Chandra83's picture



I see
And smell
And taste

The demons
Have feasted
Leaving nothing
But the bones

I will find them
I will finish this
Mortals are not
Pigs for the slaughter.

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Stephen Wordsmith's picture

Intriguing title. Had to stick around to discover its significance. After the first verse, I was wondering if the pigs had revolted and were out to slaughter the farmers. That would make for an interesting song.

Really like the anaphora in lines 9 and 10. Maybe it's the short lines and all that bloody imagery, but it really thrums like a pulse. I will find them. I will finish this. Yeahhh. Great stuff.