Autumn Breeze

Autumn Breeze

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Combining the skirmish prompt: Autumn with the songfight title "Broken Heart Syndrome" so sorry for another sad, breakup song.

Lyrics: 

Yesterday was summertime and all the trees had leaves
But today is cold and I'm shivering in the autumn breeze

Heartbreak follows passion in so many different ways
And I can't feel the summer heat in these autumn days
And the cold wind blows

Yesterday the sun was shining, the sky was clear and blue
But today the clouds rolled in and I am missing you

Heartbreak follows passion in so many different ways
And I can't feel the summer heat in these autumn days
And the cold wind blows

Heartbreak follows passion in so many different ways
And I can't feel the summer heat in these autumn days
And the cold wind blows
The cold wind blows



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

Yes sad but oh so good! I think I can actually feel that cold breeze! Great skirmish

musicsongwriter's picture

Autumn is often associated with sadness so it's very appropriate to create a sad song. Yours is beautiful. It's wonderful to be able to combine two prompts. Wonderful singing and playing, as always.
Nadia

AndyGetch's picture

Solid parallel verses, chorus, and wow, what a quick write!

Zeekle's picture

That guitar hook is gorgeous. Really like the pace and feel to this. That line, heartbreak follows passion, what a winner.
For a quick write this is dang good.

barbara's picture

I like the focus on the change of state, uncomplicated by circumstances, just describing the feeling of the chill and loneliness settling in. Really wonderful choice to have a full instrumental round; I loved that luxury.

mike skliar's picture

nice change up in phrasing in the 'cold wind blows' line... nice neil young-ish guitar lines in there too., nicely done!

corinne54's picture

I like the melding of the two concepts of autumn and heartbreak. The chorus is catchy and nice guitar playing too

Marilisa's picture

Love the little guitar riff at the start and end and between verses, and the instrumental - fine guitar work there! I also really like the end of the chorus ("and the cold wind blows") - gives it another dimension. Really great work!

kahlo2013's picture

Powerful and poignant analogy of heartache and autumn - the changes and loss and emptiness that both bring. Really gorgeous words and a chorus that wraps around my heart. Your guitar on this is so beautiful and as always your melodies convey a sense of honesty and heartfelt emotion brilliantly.

tjeff's picture

Cool guitar part in the intro and between verses, clean playing, and the strumming to your vocal is excellent. Love the hammering on and off. Superb chorus, love the last line.

coolparadiso's picture

Yup thats the cycle of life. The ups the downs! Nicely done, its not all black and white . Can get a spring day even in winter. Good skirmish

Roddy's picture

Good writing. The guitar is great and your blending of seasons and emotions is very skilled. The single line' and the cold wind blows' is very evocative.

metalfoot's picture

You, sir, are a riff master -- that guitar lick intrigues and invites the ears to listen to the autumnal musings which follow. Nicely done!

Gwyn Jones's picture

Great write and wonderful guitar playing...such an enjoyable listen!