You Lift the Clouds

You Lift the Clouds

Amanda West's picture

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Liner Notes: 

Wrote this this evening while I was meant to be working online for a client, except my internet kept going off for 5 or 10 mins about every 5 or 10 mins. Very frustrating work wise, but I did get this written while I was offline.

There is a LOT I am not happy with in it, so it's a one-day job to rework and do some editing on it Smile Let it sit and stew a little first Wink

Collab welcome Smile

Lyrics: 

Chorus
You lift the clouds right outta my sky
(Right outta my sky)
Ya' bring the sun right down t' my feet
(Right down t' my feet)
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing with a ding-a-ling-ling

Verse
How did you do this thing to me
Was there magic in my cuppa tea
Did you put a spell on my body
Make me melt an' go all of a quiver

pre ch
What is it that you did to me, what is it that have I become

Chorus
You lift the clouds right outta my sky
(Right outta my sky)
Ya' bring the sun right down t' my feet
(Right down t' my feet)
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing with a ding-a-ling-ling

Verse
I never felt this tingle before
An' my fingers they feel the roar
There's a butterfly struck in the middle
Of ma' tummy that's all of a pickle

pre ch
What is it that you did to me, what is it that have I become

Chorus
You lift the clouds right outta my sky
(Right outta my sky)
Ya' bring the sun right down t' my feet
(Right down t' my feet)
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing with a ding-a-ling-ling

Bridge
I'm a rockin
An a rollin
I'm a singing into the night
I'm a hoppin
An a boppin
It's heart stoppin because it feels right

Chorus
You lift the clouds right outta my sky
(Right outta my sky)
Ya' bring the sun right down t' my feet
(Right down t' my feet)
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing
Ya' make me sing with a ding-a-ling-ling



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Comments

Tim Fatchen's picture

The chorus is bouncy indeed! Yeahyeah, there're rough patches in the verses, so what? A good basis for a happy upbeat and luminous song. Should be more of them! (I'm reminded of REMs hatred of their most popular song, Jappy smiling people, because they didn't consider it "art"...!!!!)

cindyrella's picture

Wonderfully catchy! You were productive offline! Nice!