Smiles That Waltz

Smiles That Waltz

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Liner Notes: 

Woke up with the first part of first verse spinning in my head so quickly finished up the thoughts it evoked

Too sappy?

Waltz in my mind but open to your ideas

Lyrics: 

Lyrics:
V1
I love
when sun
smiles
brightly
on your
cheeks

I love
when wind
waltzes
gently
through your
hair

and as the
sun shines
and as the
wind blows
I love you more
each day...
more than
you know....

C
you bring me
smiles
that waltz
in my thoughts
you bring me
sparks that
flare up in
my heart
you bring
me love
each day and
all night long

you bring me
smiles
that waltz

V2
I love
when stars
sparkle
softly
in your eyes

I love
when fire
flares up
boldly
in your heart

and as the
stars shine
and as the
fire glows
I love you
each night
more than
you know....

C
you bring me
smiles
that waltz
in my thoughts
you bring me
sparks that
flare up in
my heart
you bring
me love
each day and
all night long

you bring me
smiles
that waltz

B
even in the rain
even in the snow
I will always
love you
more than
you know
more than
I can show...

C
you bring me
smiles
that waltz
in my thoughts
you bring me
sparks that
flare up in
my heart
you bring
me love
each day and
all night long

you bring me
smiles
that waltz



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Comments

Roddy's picture

Not too sappy at all, more like a genuine expression of love. When I read your 'Too sappy?' comment I expected something quite different. This is sincere and addresses a key question, how can you express love? One answer is to write about it in the way that you have just done. Good writing.
PS Have just read it through a few times and I think it's a very subtle piece of writing, the structure of the short sentences and the way they have been broken up is very interesting. 'Love you... more than I can show' is a very good line.