My Blood Hums

My Blood Hums

Chandra83's picture



My blood hums
Through my body
The demons are close
I can feel it

My sword is ready
To slash and kill
And my soul screams
For the end of this

I move in
And strike hard
The monsters will not
Live out the night

When I am through
And all are dead
I walk on
Breathing easier.

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Tim Fatchen's picture

There's a lot of power in your more martial (for want of a better word?) poems. This has fear, bite and recovery built in, in such a short and sparse and elegant space.