Just Twinkle

Just Twinkle

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Was a fawm song from Feb. this year, few more words written today during Sunday skirmish, had somewhat forgotten about it until prompt today always meant to work it out a little more............this is what I got so far........gonna call it good enough for now and moving on Wink

Edit: New version is a friend outside of 50/90 singing and on acoustic from a phone recording, with some ustaknow bass, blame me for all the other nuttiness Biggrin

Lyrics: 

Keep twinkling little star
shine your light down
where we are
out away from
this world so far
I liked it when I didn't
Know what you are

We'll just pretend tonight
Everything is alright
You just twinkle

When you wish upon a star
They don't care who you are
what you're worth
what you've done
we're all here together
shouldn't we have some fun



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kahlo2013's picture

Great to hear this coming together! I love the groove you create and the effervescent vocal effects. There is a magical atmospheric feel.

I love how it evolved in the second verse, -- very well done; great stuff! I'd run that vocal behind the clarified one slightly time shifted (if the same track, but just overdriven?)... anyway... I think I know how it'd sound... and just and idea since seems like you're gonna have another revision (?) well, maybe, as that goes!

Candle's picture

A progressive lullaby perhaps? I really like the groove (as @kahlo2013 mentions). I could see you maybe adding a guitar solo in there towards the end, but then - maybe that would take away from the lovely atmosphere you've already created. Nice!

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HelioSonorouS's picture

Cool to hear right after the previous, has a soft and gentle sound to it and conveys some hope for the future.

You are a great producer! Smile

So, like for the new vocal, you heard her voice and thought of this lyric and, - spot on.

Hahhh, I was shocked at "bad bad man..." too "funny" to hear that lyric with her sweet voice, the contrast is the "it".

But, here, in this, it just fits, -- both, great backing one to the other.

(This is the stuff that really makes music fun.)

dzd's picture

Thanks!, and that it does make it fun! and I agree that one really cracked me up too in the best of ways Biggrin