Bright Star Above

Bright Star Above

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The prompt was at 5 am her so i just a did a lyric! @splittybooms did some nice spacey music for his skirmish. I contacted Mile and allowed me to use the music so i skirmished the skirmish. I tried for a quick turnaround and put the 2 together! I did not change a word. Musically all i did was double the first 3/4 of the music and second time around leave the whole track so i didnt really change either the music or the words, i then combined our two titles. I did 1 take only on vocals so its a real skirmish demo all my work took me about 20 minutes. et voila a skirmished skirmish

Lyrics: 

Verse 1
The world is gonna change
You know it always will
So you wish for what you want
The blue or the red pill

Verse 2
I see your face and I say
Its too late for goodbyes
Im sure i know what you really want
I can see it in your eyes

Pre chorus
You can't stay and you can't go
You’re near or you’re so far
Come in try and get back the spark
You are the brightest star

Chorus
Tell me what I wanna know
before you leave my side
The way you touch, makes my heart beat fast
Its like a rollercoaster ride

Verse3
For now it seems you’ve flown away
I'm alone but not afraid
I finally think I’ve cracked it
And Ive made the grade

Verse 4
Its all been so exhausting
But i wanna take your hand
So lets take off together
Just see where we land

Pre chorus
You can't stay and you can't go
You’re near or you’re so far
Come in try and get back the spark
You are the brightest star

Chorus
Tell me what I wanna know
before you leave my side
The way you touch, makes my heart beat fast
Its like a rollercoaster ride



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Comments

artyredsocks's picture

The way you touch, makes my heart beat fast
Its like a rollercoaster ride~

NICE!

Hey this is our first collab, finally!
I feel like your lyrics and vocals give this even more whimsy and positive vibes. To put the melody together and fit it with the music in a skirmish-effort is impressive.
Yeah your vocal style def give this a more upwards feel, more happy, light. Its also cool to hear how vocals over something that I never thought of vocals being on, can really work.
I'm glad the track tickled your fancy. If you ever wanna do anything more with it, I'll send you over the stems so you can manipulate it as you please!
Thanks for this, dude!

dzd's picture

Oh this is great! I loved both of these listening to/reading the skirmish songs, awesome how well they gelled Smile This is impressive indeed!
Great work!

ustaknow's picture

It's really great how that all turned out for a skirmished-skirmish! Great stuff.

philmcmill's picture

That's pretty impressive to combine 2 songs and basically keep the same components of each. Well done! (He's not doing 5090 this year, but Klaus from Helsinki has done some interesting combinations like this in the past)

A.Eye's picture

Vocals and music feel very cosmic. It's like floating through space looking at the stars.