Bright Star

Bright Star

Roddy's picture
Feast

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Liner Notes: 

Only saw the challenge a few minutes before it ended. Here's a Haiku (of sorts) based on the theme. I cheated and added a little bit of piano a few minutes later.

Lyrics: 

a light from a star
is a message from the past
winking to say Hi



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Comments

tjeff's picture

Lovely piano and message, and a really cool short work, very nice.

Kristi's picture

Oh, this is really sweet and made me smile. Lovely piano!

The piano is perfect for these words.
I love the concept of the words, too. "...message from the past" - that made me feel such distance and time in a very quick moment.
And the "saying hi" reinforces my feelings of stars having a certain "cuteness" or lovableness.

dzd's picture

I love it! it's perfect! beautiful, poignant, and short and sweet! piano twinkles are a perfect addition!

Marilisa's picture

Oh, this is so tiny and yet packs in so much! It's really lovely! Works so well spoken over the twinkly piano.

musicsongwriter's picture

10 seconds of pure bliss! Amazing how you made such a magical short song. Your voice is hypnotic and so is your piano Roddy.
Nadia

johnstaples's picture

Beautiful! Short and sweet! And I love the star reference; it always blows me away to think we are looking at the past when stargazing! Nice work!

Jyllian's picture

Your voice is pretty cool and this thing is too