Premonition

Premonition

ZsuzsaDoe's picture

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Liner Notes: 

I've been recording a lot of stuff but I'm horrible at finishing drafts to upload lately, attempting to change that.
Not sure this one comes across the way it was intended, might revisit later to remove some kitsch hehe

Lyrics: 

Thoughts crashing forward, standing still
A boulder rolling up a hill
Keeping on, moving strong
Empty head on a pretty neck

What you become and what you learn
A self-fulfilling bridge to burn
Keep it light, hold on tight
And don’t let go

Cause yes you know how it ends
Every step, every plan
You have found
What it means to be cautious

Every sign well received
Every road, where it leads
Happy go fuck me
I should be so lucky to know.

Whenever it hits
You give it an inch and it bites down to the bone
Whatever you give
It can never take on the illusion of control

Cause yes you know how it ends
But every step, every plan
Has gone and twisted the meaning of cautious

Take every sign well received
Track every road, and where it leads
Happy go lucky
If I was the last one to know



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Comments

Jessica Szturmann's picture

The piano is so lovely to listen to and your voice so smooth, like satin. Beautiful track! You created enchanting melodies here and I really appreciate the lyrics. " Every plan Has gone and twisted the meaning of cautious" is such a fantastic line. I hope you are well proud of this!

artyredsocks's picture

Really enjoyed the piano vox it relates well to the lyric, me espeacaially liked the line "

You give it an inch and it bites down to the bone

standup's picture

Really pretty, and kept my attention. Who is this strong, empty-headed person? Who is cautious. And learning their way in the world.

But really beautiful through this journey.

cleanshoes's picture

Love the piano and vocal, as usual! This appears sweet at the outset, but has some wonderful bite. Sounds both vulnerable and cautionary. "Happy go fuck me/I should be so lucky to know" is a brilliant lyric, as is "You give it an inch and it bites down to the bone."