Greed Machine

Greed Machine

adamh's picture

Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

I actually had three verses but decided to pull the third out as I didnt think it worked so its a bit short.

Lyrics: 

Im struggling each day,
Cause I cant look away,
When they push what their selling,
Right into my face.
its so tempting to see,
What it could do for me,
But every penny spent,
Makes me feel worse instead

This greed machine, wont let go of me,
This greed machine, wont let go of me

The wheels turns
And I never seem learn
As it breaks me down
Till I lose the nerve,
To walk away,
carry on living each day,
Free from the pull
That makes me so unhappy

This greed machine, wont let go of me,
This greed machine, wont let go of me



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Comments

artyredsocks's picture

Great when a lyric can be universal and point then and talk to us. Like the laid back style and vocal too!
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As note, the machine now uses email and sends me daily remembers how I can fuel this!!!

Jessica Szturmann's picture

I really like the lyrics and your delivery, I can tell this is a topic close to your heart! This is such an important message! Thanks for sharing! The concept of "greed machine" works really well.

cleanshoes's picture

Relatable! I like the rhythm and simple guitar on this one, and the vocal styling on "greed machine" is catchy in and of itself!