Let's Call It A Draw

Let's Call It A Draw

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Written two days late for the songfight.org title: "Let's Call It A Draw" so it won't be entered. That's okay, I got a song out of it.

Lyrics: 

You were crying and I didn't understand
How you could feel that way
After all the things I did for you
You would let it end in one day

I got angry and I said some things
I know I made it worse
I guess I should have been right there for you
Instead I let the bubble burst

Let's call it a draw
Call it a draw
Because I'm sorry for it all
I want to be the man that
You fell in love with
Not some guy that you once saw
Let's call it a draw

I guess I never did listen enough
To the things you had to say
I guess I didn't really understand
How you could feel betrayed

Let's call it a draw
Call it a draw
Because I'm sorry for it all
I want to be the man that
You fell in love with
Not some guy that you once saw
Let's call it a draw
Call it a draw
Because I'm sorry for it all
I want to be the man that
You fell in love with
Not some guy that you once saw
Let's call it a draw



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Comments

Cicpisces's picture

Really enjoyed this. Had a great rhythm to it. Good storytelling lyric and the vocal tone was spot on for the content. Done a good job here. Nice work.

IA's picture

I'm already anticipating your choruses even before they happen. And this one is a good one again! You're so good with this style.

This could be a really popular pop rock track. Relatable and easy on the ears. Is this your career-defining masterpiece? Hmmmmmmmm