Another Scar

Another Scar

Chandra83's picture



Another scar
Marks my skin
But deadly

I was never pretty
Scars are my life
But I sometimes wish
I had a few less scrapes

But I keep hunting
And I keep killing
This is my path
And I'll walk it 'till the end.

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metalfoot's picture

The shorter line length in the first stanza is potent. Like there is more to say but the hunter is holding it back from us.

Part battle cry, part reflection on fate; I don't know what the protagonist is encountering and part of me hopes I never find out!