Out Of Reach

Out Of Reach

tcelliott's picture

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GYAWS prompt was "out of reach"... hence the song title, right?

Lyrics: 

I feel lost, don't know which way to go
Now that you're gone I just don't know
Am I happy or sad you stole my heart like a thief?

You've been gone just a day or two
Are you taking a break or are we through?
I'm so confused, don't know what to believe

And all I know is when I go to sleep
I need you here but you're out of reach
And the whole damn world seems like it's going to hell
Maybe it is, I can't tell

I wish you would call or write a letter
If you blame it on me Id' still feel better
Not knowing where you are is breaking my heart

And every minute that passes by
Is another minute I wonder why
You ran away, you wanted us to be apart

And all I know is when I go to sleep
I need you here but you're out of reach
And the whole damn world seems like it's going to hell
Maybe it is, I can't tell

I guess it won't matter if you choose to stay away
In spite of it all I hope that you're okay

And all I know is when I go to sleep
I need you here but you're out of reach
And the whole damn world seems like it's going to hell
Maybe it is, I can't tell

And all I know is when I go to sleep
I need you here but you're out of reach



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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

nice one. Good strong guitar and a really nice poignant chorus.

cleanshoes's picture

Classic singer-songwriter! I really enjoyed the guitar on this track--nice progression and little flourishes throughout.

IA's picture

Ooff that "world seems like it's going to hell Maybe it is, I can't tell" section is so good. So satisfying when the hook hits. You must be pretty proud of that. I would.

I like this type of music. Wistful and a bit of who-cares-itude. Maybe a bit victim mentality? I just relate.

Great!