Torn

Torn

cindyrella's picture

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Found out I have a torn muscle so I wrote this.

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Torn

My name's not Peter or even Russell
But it's true I have a torn muscle
I can't twitch my nose or do a spell
But this torn muscle hurts like hell

Chorus
I'm old it's true
Can't run no more
But this torn muscle
Is damn sore
Do I need a cane
No not yet
To how soon I'll heal
Is anyone's bet

I'm not Elvis or Rip Van Winkle
But this is a pain when I gotta tinkle
I'm not a tornado or a hurricane
But this here's muscle is a pain

Repeat chorus



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Comments

tjeff's picture

Excellent meter and rhyme! I got a chuckle or 2 as well, fun story. Sorry about the torn muscle, that must hurt.

metalfoot's picture

torn muscles are sure ouchy. Heal quickly, Cindy, and take care!

Gwyn Jones's picture

You've created something good out of something bad...well done Cindy and I hope you heal and feel better soon...