Change In The Air
Post date:
08/22/2020 - 12:17
Demo:
Lyrics:
The night breaths on me,
So gently,
That its hard to see, how Its changing me,
But I know
Fear shakes me down
When I look around,
I wander how, Its led me round,
This new town // the same place
A feel change in the air,
A break in the wind from nowhere,
As the rain falls in, my face soeaking
A feel a change coming in
But no-one want to see,
What its does to me,
But my head is torn, My eyes are worn,
I cant sleep,
I seem to find my peace,
In the memories, I keep,
Would it be a leap, To let go and see,
What next,
A feel change in the air,
A break in the wind from nowhere,
As the rain falls in, my face soeaking
A feel a change coming in
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Comments
I love the ways you sing the word "change" - with vibrato, and with that alternate scale you go to. It's great word-painting, and a really cool effect. The whole song has a nice motion to it along with the emotion of the words.
Soulful delivery overall, and I agree with Nancy above--the vocal styling on "change" is a treat to hear. Enjoyed the listen!