failedluddite's picture



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


colgoo's picture

You really capture an ominous feel at the beginning with all those minor chords! This feels like the soundtrack to a murder mystery. I love the story build when it sounds like a choir of angels coming in around the 2 minute mark. And then you have that discordant section to bring us back into the creepiness of the opening scene. Great work!

failedluddite's picture

What can I say, I like minor chords. I’d been sitting on this for a while, because I wasn’t sure it was complete, but today decided that all it needed was a reprise of the opening section with a new melody on top.
The choir was a synth pad originally, but think the sampled voices fit much better with the rest of the song.

metalfoot's picture

This is not a pleasant and gentle moonlight-- this is moonlight on a night when things are just not quite going well for you. Great sound and amazing tone painting with the music.

Sunfire's picture

I'm sensing a moonlight of caution and mystery that generates a powerful emotional response in the context of whatever is happening. Very nice.