East (feedback wanted)
Feedback wanted if you have time:
1 - does the main melody get repetitive/do you get bored or tired of it?
2 - how to better transition into the different instrument changes and sections?
3 - does the piano part work at the end?
This is not a style that I try very often. I think just last year's 50/90, I tried my first waltz.
Some of you on here have inspired me to at least try a more orchestral style, just to see.
The main melody was inspired by music that was in the background on a youtube video; the youtuber is a food blogger and this particular video was him touring a floating market on the Mekong Delta.
Anyway, it was something about that traditional melody that everytime I hear it, stirs something within. Its an odd sensation and happens without fail every time I hear it.
But again, this is not my wheelhouse of styles; the arrangement skills needed to make orchestral music - - yeah, I don't have that. Yet.
So I'm asking the community the above questions, if you have the time and don't mind giving feedback. I know there have been many many convos about the topic of feedback, but I'm specifically asking for it here (and for the record, I don't ever mind it even if I don't ask). And anything else you can think of, please tell me.
So thanks in advance!
I wanna try more like this, but need a little direction.
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.