I've had this chorus for over a year. I wrote it for as a possible for Song Fight! with @tcelliott, so this sounds a lot like Evil Grin to me, it's just me playing all the parts. I almost hit him up for it, but I have been wanting to get into programming drums, so I saved it for myself. The drums took me a LONG time, but I actually think I have it figured out now. Whether the drums are good are not is another matter entirely. Hahaha! Watching @headfirstonly yesterday write that song in a hour(ish) was very helpful. I was making it too complicated. What...? I would never do that.
I don't like the second verse, but I couldn't think of anything else. If something better comes to mind, I'll switch it out.
It’s been a long time comin’
Shoulda left you years ago
Why’d I think that you would ever change?
All you do is take what you want
And give me nothing back
Don’t know the rules to your damn game
I’ve gotta protect my heart
My mind, my soul
You’re not getting in anymore
You can look, but I wouldn’t touch
You can beg, but it won’t help much
You can cry, but I’m not your goddamn crutch
This porcupine’s got her quills up
It was that night in Vegas
That was the final straw
Enjoy life with your stripper whore
It wasn’t her fault alone
Walk your fucking face out of my door
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.