Pouring Out

Pouring Out

Chandra83's picture



So much blood
Pouring out
Soaking the ground

I stand
And I watch
Feeling nothing
About these deaths

That I brought
Out of necessity
To save
Mortal life

Are not humans
And I will not grieve them
As such.

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AndyGetch's picture

I am liking the phrase breaks at the end of each line. Each one could almost be a title and as a stand alone in a space triggers many associative memories.