She moved out and I aint moved on

She moved out and I aint moved on

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Did this one noodling (listening to Aint that America - G 'C') and the hook came out, then wrote it out, is years and years since breakup and seems the only time I think about it is when writing a liner note... 5 more weeks of Covid 4 lockdown and stupid people problems at work

Lyrics: 

She moved out and I aint moved on

Draft

RogersonLB

V1

Grew up in a one, pony town

Just main street, and general store

all the rest was, dusty ground

Had vowed to get myself a lady

keeping her happy for evermore

Chrous

Sun must be getting bored

all this rising and setting

Happened so many times

But how come i still cant stop forgetting

She moved out and I aint moved on

V2

Thing that got me first, Auburn hair

Pouting smile, green twinkling eyes

Other thoughts disappeared

Chrous

Sun must be getting bored

all this rising and setting

Happened so many times

But how come i still cant stop forgetting

She moved out and I aint moved on

Bridge

Hey god thought you said you care and yet you didn't answer this poor mans prayers

On my knees again, oh the pain, the pain ohhhhh, the pain

Chrous

Sun must be getting bored

all this rising and setting

Happened so many times

But how come i still cant stop forgetting

She moved out and I aint moved on



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cts's picture

Those kind of breakups are always the hardest. At least that has been my experience with the ones I've had...not being able to move on once she's out of the scene. Pretty good structure with this one. If my memory serves me correctly, I believe you're more of a lyricist, right? Nonetheless if you get a demo up let me know.