I Don't See You On The Menu

Saltyjohn

Post date:

08/10/2020 - 12:32

Liner Notes:

Songs don't come much simpler than this - two verses and a chorus.

Lyrics:

I Don’t See You On The Menu

V1
A table in the corner,
A glass of Premier Cru
The waiter takes my order
But all I want is you

Chorus:
But I don’t see you on the menu
Or I’d order two of you
I’d have one as my entree
And one to take away
But I don’t see you on the menu
And all I really want is you

V2
We would come here together
Share a chocolate fondue
But now you’ve gone forever
I just want a bowl of you

Chorus:
But I don’t see you on the menu
Or I’d order two of you
I’d have one as my entree
And one to take away
But I don’t see you on the menu
And all I really want is you

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Comments

Descriptive verses, nice progression in the 2nd verse (But now you've gone forever). Strong chorus! Nice one!

I love the craving sense of longing that you develop with the wonderful analogy of eating/food. The first verse draws me right in and it builds so well in second verse. The chorus is great. This sings off the page and I hope will get put to music!