Chandra83's picture



I wait for Death
To come and take me
Somewhere far
From everything else

I need sleep
And I crave solace
The living world
Gives me none of that

And when he comes
And leads me away
I go with him gently
As clouds across the sky.

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fresh spotless youth's picture

You had me at "death" and "non-rhyming." Non-rhyming is sort of second nature to me, so I wouldn't have noticed if you hadn't mentioned it. Everything tumbles out freely, leading us sweetly to the conclusion. Ah, to go gently across the sky