Underneath

Underneath

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One drop
Becomes many
A stream
Becomes a pool

Life is gone
Never to return
To a corpse
That will lie unnoticed

When did her smile stop?
When did her eyes not sparkle?
When did joy become foolish,
And death become wise?

These are questions
No one can answer
Because no one knew her
Underneath it all.



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Roddy's picture

The drop-stream-pool connections are very good. The title is intriguing and then comes back in the last line, I thought that was pretty good writing. ...'death become wise'. is very thought provoking too, in fact the whole poem is thought provoking. Well-written poetry.