0550902020 I'm not writing a song

0550902020 I'm not writing a song

Graceville's picture

Demo: 

0550902020



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.

Comments

Fuzzy's picture

No, you are definitely not writing a beautiful tune here.
You are also not an excellent guitar player.
You also do not have a soulful and appealing vocal style.
Reading the lyrics from a bright red manual typewriter is also not a lovely touch in this video.
(Great beard, by the way; you should check out @OdilonGreen's tunes; he writes songs exclusively about beards.)
(You know I mean the opposite of what I've said above, right? Smile )

AndyGetch's picture

I am not writing a song for you is a great concept. Soothing guitar and love the nature backdrop. The camera moving further away in the fade out is a nice video touch.